Sunday, July 8, 2012

About the Author Pages by S.M. Blooding


Who Am I?


Hey! I’m the interview coordinator for PYN. Today, I’d like to discuss your About the Author page!

As someone whose job it is to find interesting morsels of information about you so I can ask questions that are relevant, I can say that I’ve seen my fair share of About the Author pages. I’ve seen some really fantastic ones, and I’ve seen more than a few that weren’t so great.

The first thing to remember is that people actually want to find out more about you! So, having an About the Author page is important.

The second thing to know is that there are a few key things to have on your page:

Brief Bio

Author Photo


That’s your bare minimum. This is what should be on every author site. If you’re an author, if you have books, then you need to have a page that has this information.

This, however, is pretty basic. What can you do to set your page apart from the pack? Let’s take a look at a few quick examples of good author pages.
 
  • Roxy Boroughs: http://www.roxyboroughs.com/bio/ She did a great job of jabbing a bit of fun with a Whoopee cushion. It was short, quick, to the point, but it showed she has a sense of humor.
  • Eisley Jacobs: http://eisleyjacobs.com/ Her author page is the welcome page, which is fine, but she used whit throughout her brief bio to show the reader the sense of humor you’ll find in her books. She also showed how her characters (even if they’re dragons) relate to her.
  • Beth Dolgner: http://www.bethdolgner.com/about/ This is a fantastic example of having FUN!!! I bought her book after reading her BIO! I glanced through her blurb, sure, but I was SOLD on her blurb! I knew I wouldn’t be disappointed, and I wasn’t! She’s a hoot! Her books are a hoot! GREAT job!!
  •  SM Blooding: http://www.smblooding.com/about-the-author/ This seems a bit like self promotion, I know, but I took all the things I learned from everyone else’s pages and lumped what I could onto mine. Another thing I LOVE about my Author Page is that readers, like you, can leave me a message right there. I love that!

Now, if you’re not witty, that’s okay. Some authors do great when writing the Great American Novel, but choke on the one paragraph thing. So what can you do if you “suck at the wit”?

1. Mention a hobby! Throw up a picture or two! At the very least, it’s a conversation starter! You wouldn’t believe how many people love to talk about crocheting or cupcake baking! OMW!! Trust me when I say that others probably share your hobby and they LOVE finding kindred spirits to discuss them with.

2. Mention your favorite place you traveled to and…share a picture! People love to travel. They dream of it, fantasize about having enough money to do so! So share that little tidbit with the world and let them talk to you about it!

3. List your interviews! OMW, people! This helps and it’s a great place for people to find out all kinds of crazy things about you. It’s easy to open up when someone’s asking you questions! Right? So why bury these morsels of information on a Google page?! Display them proudly on your About You page. Plus, it makes you seem popular AND interviewers will, hopefully, not ask you questions you’ve already answered a dozen times before.

4. What are your favorite, zany cuss words? I’m not talking about the lame ones, F__Bomb, S__Bomb, etc. I want to hear your favorites! “Oh, holy banana farts!” The ones that get the mad out and make people laugh their pants off at the same time. *nods*

5. Dig deep! What is the one thing that makes you zany? We’re all a little nuts, but that’s what makes us writers! So…use it to your advantage!

I hope this helped!! I look forward to interviewing you!!!

We’re working to set up interviews for Winter 2012! If you’re interested, please fill out this form and I’ll get back to you as soon as I can!! http://parayournormal.blogspot.com/p/loading.html
 


To find out more about SM Blooding, visit her page at http://www.smblooding.com/, and add her books to your Goodreads TBR pile at http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/5234671.S_M_Blooding

Monday, July 2, 2012

Plotting the Paranormal by Kirsten Weiss



Plotting the Paranormal: An Alchemical Solution

 

by Kirsten Weiss


True confession: I have alchemy on the brain.  Renaissance alchemy is a mystical process – a blend of magic, philosophy, and chemistry.  And while writing the second Riga Hayworth mystery, The Alchemical Detective, everything seemed to have an alchemical connection – from knitting to chocolate to plotting itself.  

In the classical storytelling plot, things grow more and more difficult for our heroine, with little gasps of relief to keep the heroine, and the reader, moving forward.   You can break this structure into five stages: 

  • Exposition: the problem is presented;
  • Rising action: conflict is generated, the plot thickens, the tension rises;
  • Climax: a fateful decision is made which sets the heroine on her course;
  • Falling action: the bad guy has the upper hand, all appears dark; and
  • Resolution: the final conflict between the heroine and the bad guy.

The alchemical process works much the same way – a series of revolutions where the ego or metal is burned and broken down, then revived, until finally, like a phoenix rising from the ashes, the spirit rises to perfection.  Since I was writing about alchemy, it seemed “right” to hang my plot structure on the alchemical process.   I don’t want to give too much away, spoiling the ending.  But in broad strokes, this is how the alchemical stages flow:

  • Calcination: A burning of the self to ash, often due to a trauma.  Metaphyiscal detective, Riga Hayworth, has lost her magic and come to Lake Tahoe to recover and spend quality time with her new love.  But a psychic’s been murdered, and the police believe Riga has a connection to the crime.  Worse, she has reason to believe she may be the next victim.
  • Dissolution: Water is added to the ash.  Fears and old wounds rise to the surface, threatening to swamp Riga’s equilibrium.
  • Separation: The police aren’t equipped to deal with a magical killer.  Riga realizes she must deal with the murderer on her own to protect the people she loves.
  • Conjunction: Riga begins to glimpse the truth about her magic and the killer.  She takes action based upon her vision/beliefs, setting things into motion.
  • Putrefaction: The situation festers, gets worse.  Riga battles the demons inside and outside of herself.
  • Distillation: Riga fights to reclaim her magic and catch the killer.  This is the make or break moment – she either rises to the occasion and triumphs over her inner and outer demons, or all is lost.
  • Coagulation: Balance and harmony are restored.  

I know, I said I wouldn’t give away the ending, but since there’s a sequel, it’s no mystery that Riga gets her man.  


Excerpt from The Alchemical Detective:

The egg quivered, then rolled, seemingly of its own accord, to the edge of the counter.  

Riga stared at it, her violet-colored eyes narrowed in concentration.  Magic, she reminded herself, was a matter of will and she had that in spades.  However, it was also a matter of focus and in this area, she was lacking.

The egg trembled, then slowly rose into the air; one inch, two inches, five.

“Yes,” Brigitte said encouragingly, her voice a French-accented Lauren Bacall.  Her stone claws tensed, gouging tracks in the linoleum countertop.

The egg exploded, splattering the gargoyle with shell and yolk.  

Brigitte shrieked, the sound of rocks scraping against each together.  “Faugh!  Water!  Bring ze water!”  

Riga hurried to the sink and turned on the tap, frustration wrinkling her brow.  She grabbed a dishtowel and soaked it in warm water.  Her hands trembled and Riga swore under her breath.  Two months ago, this would have been easy.  

At first she’d thought her magic was gone.  Now Riga knew it had gone haywire and her rehab attempts weren’t working.  If anything, her magic had become more unpredictable, more dangerous.  She only dared practice with Brigitte because the centuries-old gargoyle was made of stone.  But even Brigitte wasn’t indestructible.  

Someone beat upon the front door and Riga whipped around, startled.  She should have sensed whoever was coming up the steps.  Another small failure.  More pounding; the cheap wooden door vibrated beneath the blows.

“Police!  Open the door!”

Gargoyle and woman looked at each other.  Woman acted first.  Riga tossed the towel in the sink.  
“Don’t move,” she said to Brigitte.

“But ze egg.  It dries like cement,” Brigitte wailed.

“Later.”  Riga hurried to the door and flung it open.  A chilly blast of pine-scented air swept inside, tossing Riga’s auburn hair and stinging her skin.  

Two sheriffs stood before her in wide brimmed hats and heavy dark brown parkas.  Riga might have taken them for rangers had it not been for their belts, strapped with weapons, slung low on their hips.  The older one had his fist raised for another round of door pummeling.  He lowered it with what looked like regret.  He was bulky, bearlike, with steel blue eyes, and she imagined he enjoyed making the door shiver beneath his fist.  The tag under his badge read: Sheriff John King.  The badge itself: El Dorado County.

“I heard a woman scream,” King said.  

“I banged my shin on the coffee table,” Riga said.  

“Are you alone?”  He peered over Riga’s shoulder.  It wasn’t hard – Riga was five foot six, and he stood well over six feet tall, imposing in every direction.  

“Yes.  Can I help you?”  Riga didn’t budge, unwilling to let them in.  It wasn’t that Riga didn’t like cops; she was friends with plenty of them, when they were out of uniform.  

“It was quite a scream,” he said.

She quirked her lips.  “Now you’re just embarrassing me.” 


Kirsten Weiss is the author of two paranormal mysteries available on the Kindle: the urban fantasy, The Metaphysical Detective, and The Alchemical Detective. The latter will be FREE over the 4th of July week.  She is hard at work on the sequel, The Shamanic Detective.  Follow her on Twitter @RigaHayworth or keep up with her paranormal blog at: http://kirstenweiss.com

Sunday, July 1, 2012

Interview with RS Guthrie, Author of Black Beast


Today we're interviewing R.S. Guthrie, author of Black Beast--a paranormal thriller set in Denver, Colorado. Leave a comment to be entered to win an e-copy of Black Beast and LOST


 

Hey, R.S.!! It’s good to see you! Tell us a little bit about yourself? 

Well, I grew up in Iowa and Wyoming, so I’m a bit of a small town guy. But I’ve lived in L.A. and Denver since my twenties, so my writing covers all that ground. I’m a family guy and our dogs (3 Aussies and one little Chihuahua who thinks she’s an Aussie) are like our kids.

What does R stand for? 

If you believe the AKC documentation for our first Aussie (and the subsequent emails I get from them), it stands for Rolo. I think my parents intended Robert (and I go by Rob).

How do you carve out time to write?  

That’s a tough one because it feels sometimes like all there is to carve with is a dull spoon. I’m like Andy in The Shawshank Redemption…it’ll take me twenty years to carve out enough time to do all the writing I need to do (and another twenty to write it)!

Which book are we talking about today and what is it about? 

Well we were supposed to be talking about Dark Prairies, a crime novel set in Wyoming, but remember that dull spoon we were talking about? I’m not quite ready for release (two weeks), so we’ll talk about the first in my two (soon to be three) book series featuring Denver Detective Bobby Mac. In Black Beast the reader gets to first meet a character they will no kidding fall in love with (I always say “guys want to be him, ladies want to be with him”). In all seriousness, I’ve actually had a writer friend who professes love for Bobby.

In Black Beast, Bobby catches a double-homicide with some strange twists that turn out to be a little bit further into the “unknown” than he’s ever been willing to go. He discovers a family heritage, however, that will change everything for the detective. It’s a fast-paced page-turner.

What inspired this book? 

Bobby Mac’s character has been inside me, waiting to be written for over a decade. He once lived in Seattle, also Portland, L.A., and Phoenix. He ended up in Denver because that’s where I had settled once I finally decided to sit down and write the dang novel.

Tell us something about your characters that we wouldn’t be able to figure out by reading the book. 

Bobby Mac is a total mama’s boy. In the book he’s tough-but-tender, but you’d never guess how much he misses his mother.

Is there a book 4 in the works? Can you tell us a bit about it? 

Book three, which will hopefully be out by the end of the summer, will tie up the supernatural tangent Bobby’s been on through books one and two. But YES, there will be a book four (and beyond) as Bobby gets back more into the detective grind in Denver with some really cool cases.

Where can readers purchase your book? 

http://amzn.to/BeastNovel

May we read an excerpt from the book?

WHY DO we let the bad times rent space in our heads? It’s something I’ve never been that good at: letting the ugliness slide off me like watershed—off the duck’s back and all that.
In fact, for me, the pain builds up over time—like a splinter left unattended under your thumbnail. You try to ignore it; pay no attention to it. But without thinking, your other fingers pick at it. Squeeze it. Scratch the itch.
And after a while—over a period of days or weeks or even years—this small, seemingly insignificant prickle has become swollen and infected and full of bad juice. It’s then the pain begins to swallow up the better things in life.
I’m not proud of my failure in this area. Most would say I should’ve long ago unloaded to some shrink from the comfort of a leather couch. But that kind of release is no good for me.
It doesn’t work—I clam up.
Even though I realize letting things pile up in my head is no winning strategy for any person, much less for a cop, I still can’t share such personal insights with a complete stranger. Unfortunately, there are a great many things stacked up in there—like a multi-car pileup on a foggy highway.
It’s also my theory that too many shrinks have a rosy, optimistic view of the world; they come at you from a singsong vantage that just doesn’t ring true.
I’m not saying Nietzsche had it right. God is not dead. But at least Friedrich wasn’t running through the flower patch, dancing like a deranged idiot, or climbing the twelve steps to enlightenment.
Speaking of God, I know many people who believe we are inherently good—built in his image. I used to feel that way. I used to go to mass and read the passages and bow my head in prayer.
(For the record, few shrinks I know have ever put that much faith in a greater power, much less God himself.)
But when I became a homicide detective, my faith began a slippery descent. I’d seen some pretty awful things when I was on patrol—not the least of which was the murder of my partner—but when I started investigating the crimes; when I began to understand the machinations behind the mayhem—well, let’s just say my faith could only stand so much testing.
Don’t get me wrong. I did not stop believing in God. That would have been easy. Just chalk it up to no one’s home upstairs and call it a day. To me, God is real—just as real as the day I first attended mass with my father and mother.
Now I just hold him less accountable.
What has happened over the years is that I have relinquished a part of my understanding. My grip on the bigger picture has been loosened. No. Loosened doesn’t cover it these days.
Being one hundred percent truthful? It sometimes feels like I’ve lost hold entirely and have entered a kind of spiritual free-fall.
So do I have issues with God?
Yes.
Has my faith been shaken?
Most definitely.
In light of all this, do I still maintain hope?
I have to.
If there is not a bigger picture—if there is no purpose to this lousy existence—I wouldn’t know or understand how to proceed. What thing in life is worth doing if there is no outcome?
So here’s my nutshell—the World According to Macaulay:
God is up there. And he’s tired. He’s so damned tired of it all. He sees the handwriting on the wall—that we can hardly mess it up any more than we already have.
If you’re a parent, then you may know what this helplessness feels like:
You’ve done everything you possibly can to provide for your child. You’ve loved them, clothed them, and procured everything they needed to survive. You’ve even thought about their future—saved for it.
Eventually, however, they don’t care. Not a lot of them, anyway.
Who are you and why are you looking for love, or even respect?
It’s an ugly time, the teenage years. And I think that’s what we’ve become to God:
Teenagers.
So do I blame him for turning his back?
Not really.
But, like a teen, I also find it difficult to admit my culpability.

Where can your readers connect with you on the web? 

I’m currently revamping my main website, so it’s kind of a mess. My blog is really the best place to hook up with me (and catch some of my innermost thoughts on writing and other stuff). I’m really good about responding to comments, so come on over to http://robonwriting.comand hang out. 


About R.S. Guthrie 

R. S.  Guthrie has been writing fiction for several years. Black Beast is the first in a series of Clan of MacAulay books featuring Denver Detective Bobby Macaulay. The sequel, L O S T, released on New Year’s Day, 2012 and is now also available on Amazon. 

Guthrie is presently working on a Western Crime Novel entitled Dark Prairies, set in his home state of Wyoming. An excerpt was featured in the June 2011 issue of New West Magazine. The full book is scheduled to be released by Summer, 2012.

The author currently lives in Colorado with his wife, three Australian Shepherds, and a Chihuahua who thinks she’s a 40-lb Aussie.


Monday, June 25, 2012

Reviews on Hiatus


Please note: We're taking a brief hiatus from review requests, so we can catch up on our backlog, and enjoy our summer vacations. We will accept review requests starting September 1, 2012. Thank you for your understanding, and we hope you have a great summer!
 
~ The ParaYourNormal Review Team

Sunday, June 24, 2012

Interview with Ranae Rose, Author of Haunted Passions


Please welcome Ranae Rose, author of Haunted Passions. Be sure to join us on BlogTalkRadio this Wednesday at 3:30 PM PDT because we'll be chatting with her live then!

What can you tell us about you that we wouldn’t already know from your other interviews?

Since this is a paranormal-themed site, I’ll tell you something about me that I usually don’t have a good reason to mention: I have an obsession with paranormal, cryptozoological and extraterrestrial documentaries. I love those things. I don’t usually watch TV, but if I can spare the time, I can pass hours in complete bliss lying on the couch and learning about things like ghosts, Nessie and moth man. No amount of teasing has been able to cure me of this habit, and I will happily own up to my dorky love of all things mysterious.

Speed Answer Challenge:

Chocolate or Vanilla: Chocolate! Mmm…

Favorite color: Purple

Astrological sign: Scorpio

Favorite season: Fall

Sports car or All Terrain Vehicle: Sports car… I’m a good driver (of cars), but I’m not to be trusted with an all-terrain vehicle. Last time I rode one at a speed of more than a few miles per hour, I destroyed it and tumbled down a mountain in the process, breaking my wrist. I prefer a horse, which, unlike a motorized ride, can think for itself, and hopefully will have enough sense not to crash into a bank if I direct it to.

Watch TV or Go for a hike: Go for a hike! Who knows, I might even sight Sasquatch (a dorky dream of mine)… LOL!

Favorite animal: Horse, though I’m also a dog-lover.

Tell us a bit about your book.

Haunted Passions is my own unique version of the Sleepy Hollow legend. In my Sleepy Hollow, Brom and John (that’s what I call my ‘Ichabod’ character, who is significantly sexier in my world than in the original Legend of Sleepy Hollow) are lovers instead of rivals, and are both enamored with Katrina Van Tassel – it’s a historical M/M/F ménage a trois. They face the headless horseman, along with other problems, together.


What inspired Haunted Passions? And what’s the driving force behind the rest of the series?


This might sound a little strange, but it was a song that inspired Haunted Passions – ‘Closure’, by Chevelle. I guess that for me, inspiration can be just about anything. And I’ve always loved The Legend of Sleepy Hollow.
Though the paranormal aspects of the story are prominent – and I’m told chilling – the characters’ love for each other is what truly drives the series.

What is it about the paranormal that fascinates you?

Everything. I love a sense of mystery, a feeling that the world is bigger and deeper and stranger than most people like to pretend it is. I’m a strong believer in the paranormal in real life, though in my stories, it’s exaggerated or embellished. (I mean, of course I’ve never encountered any headless horsemen, werewolves, vampires or banshees in reality, though I’ve written about all those things.)

What draws you to steamy romance?


When it comes to reading and writing, I’m most drawn to the relationships between characters – especially romantic ones. With steamy books, which don’t skip out on intimate scenes, I’m not missing out on emotionally powerful content (aka, sex). Plus, why would I not want to know what goes on between two (or three!) sexy characters? ;)

What can you tell us about the rest of the series?

The other Sleepy Hollow book, Whiskey Dreams, tells the story of how Brom and John (both Revolutionary War veterans), originally fell in love – by the time Haunted Passions happens, they’ve already been in a relationship for several months. As you can imagine, it was not easy for two men to be together at that period in history. Whiskey Dreams is also currently free at major ebook retailers such as Amazon, the Apple ibooks store, Smashwords, etc… So if you’re curious about the series, you can begin it risk-free. ;)

Where can readers purchase your book? 


Haunted Passions and Whiskey Dreams are currently available from most major ebook retailers, including Amazon, Smashwords and the Apple ibooks store. And again, Whiskey Dreams is free at all those places. Here are some links for Haunted Passions:

Amazon (US)

Apple ibook Store

Smashwords

All Romance

May we read an excerpt from the book and can you provide it here?

Of course. Here’s the very beginning of Haunted Passions – as is probably made evident by the opening, it’s an emotionally-charged read:

John had never thought that his heart could be ripped out by just a few simple words, and yet, that was exactly how he felt. “We’ll be announcing our engagement tonight…” Brom’s voice echoed in his memory. “I wanted to let you know myself.”

“God damn you, Brom,” John said, wiping dampness from his forehead with his sleeve. The curse was a distraction, a failed manifestation of some emotion he didn’t know how to express – he didn’t really mean it. A part of him broiled with anger, but it was a small part; mostly, he felt dreadfully sick. He pressed a hand to his stomach, conscious of the leaden weight that had settled there when Brom had laid his hand on his shoulder, just before he’d delivered the news.

John had known that something was wrong as soon as Brom had touched him. Brom’s touch had been tense, his hand stiff and awkward as it closed ineffectually on John’s shoulder. Brom Bones had never touched anyone like that before, and likely never would again. He was a man who always knew what he wanted, a man who laid hands on a body with confidence, already sure of what he intended to do. John knew that, perhaps better than anyone. But Brom’s hand had nearly slipped off of John’s shoulder as he’d told him of his engagement to Katrina. “God damn you…” John rasped, his stomach contracting around its burden as he touched his shoulder, seeking some trace of heat, some proof that Brom’s fingers had really rested there so recently.

There was none. Only the rough fabric of his coat and the autumn chill that hung in the air and had worked its way into every stitch of his clothing, every fiber of his being. He felt as if he were already dead. Soon, he would be.

He drew a pistol from beneath his coat, caressing the barrel. There was promise in every inch of the cold steel – the promise of oblivion. It called to him, the temptation carried on the biting night breeze. He glanced over his shoulder, promising himself that it would be for the last time. His heart jolted and sped at the sight of the large farmhouse looming in the distance, its windows glowing with candlelight. The spry, shadowy forms of dancers darted back and forth behind the glass. Everyone was making merry, celebrating a good harvest, and perhaps Brom and Katrina’s engagement – had they announced it yet?

No. He wouldn’t dwell on it any longer – not the engagement, anyway. Brom and Katrina themselves, however, were different matters altogether. He turned resolutely, forcing himself to face the dark forest that stretched at the edge of the Van Tassel farmlands. Under any other circumstances, the sight of it at this time of night would have sent a chill down his spine. But what did it matter now? If there were wild beasts afoot, they could do no greater harm to him than his own hand, and if there were spirits lurking… Well, he was about to join them.

Squeezing his eyes shut, he committed his thoughts to Brom. The man’s face formed perfectly in front of his mind’s eye, complete with the oh-so-familiar strong jaw, dark eyes and even darker hair. It curled a bit at his temples and at the nape of his neck. And it felt like silk, slid easily between one’s fingers, like sweet spring grass after the rain… John inhaled, smelling not the autumn night, but the spring afternoon during which he’d first met Brom seven months ago. The memory was a double-edged sword, sweet and bitter at once. His entire body tingled, hot despite his thin clothing and the bitter wind. “Brom…” The man’s name was a whisper on his lips and was quickly swallowed up by a rushing breeze that tore several locks of his hair loose from their ribbon and whipped them across his face. They tickled his mouth, teasing, like the memory of Brom’s lips.

Katrina had lovely lips, as well. A mouth like a rosebud, in fact, and cheeks that were just as pink. He’d tasted those perfect lips just once, and had perhaps taken the experience too seriously. A wry bark of a laugh escaped him, and his thoughts spiraled rapidly toward the dark place inside him that Brom had opened up with his words. Struggling for control over his unruly emotions, he thought of Katrina’s eyes. Blue and sparkling, they were more brilliant than the brightest summer sky. Framed with golden ringlets, her face was just as perfect as Brom’s. Picturing them together was both the most beautiful and most excruciating thing he could imagine. Shoving the image from his mind, he thought finally of himself.

Though his eyes were still closed, he had no trouble seeing himself as he was: a slender figure against the dark wilderness, clad in threadbare clothes that whipped around him as a particularly violent gust of wind howled by, causing the hair on the back of his neck to stand up. He was young, and more than a little afraid of death, when he really thought about it. If anyone had been there with him, they probably would have been able to see that, would have been able to read his face like a book. But he was alone, and morbidly aware of that fact. Another vicious breeze tore his ribbon loose and carried it away. His hair flew with it, each strand stinging his face. He relished the petty pain for what little distraction it provided from his greater suffering.

The wind stilled, leaving him alone with the knowledge of all his inadequacies. He hadn’t decided to take his own life because he was angry with Brom or Katrina. In all honesty, he wished them well. He was going to end his existence because he wasn’t worthy of a man like Brom, or a woman like Katrina. When he’d found out that his chances – however flimsy they’d been in the first place – of ever having lasting happiness with either of them were nonexistent, he’d realized that they were all he really cared about. At some point since he’d arrived in Sleepy Hollow, his world had shifted on its axis and begun to revolve around Brom and Katrina, his two secret loves. And now his world was over. Swallowing the last of his inhibitions, he pressed the barrel of the gun firmly to the side of his head. “Christ – Brom, Katrina… I love you both, but neither of you will ever belong to me, and it’s more than I can bear.”

His heart beat hard and fast, his pulse thrumming in his ears so that he almost didn’t hear the faint sound of hoofbeats coming from somewhere in the distance. Was someone riding through the wood, about to discover him? He didn’t have time to wonder who it might be – not if he was going to pull this off before being seen and losing his nerve. He squeezed the trigger and something rushed unseen out of the darkness and gripped his arm so hard he thought the bones would snap.
The explosive boom of the discharging pistol threw him off balance, and he fell, ears ringing. All the breath was knocked out of him when he hit the ground, and the earth seemed to sway and pitch beneath him, like a ship on a storm-tossed sea. The pressure was still there on his arm – could it be the angel of death?

“God damn it, John!” A deep voice growled from above, shockingly familiar. “What do you think you’re doing?”

It never occurred to John to answer. Instead, he lay flat on his back, staring up at the huge figure looming against the night sky. A clunk rang out loud and clear as Brom threw the pistol, and it bounced off of a tree, falling uselessly to the ground.

As a little breath worked its way back into John’s lungs, it became clear that he hadn’t, in fact, succeeded in shooting himself. The knowledge that he’d failed in even that simple endeavor was infuriating. He ground his teeth as Brom crouched over him, leering.
Brom’s breath buffeted John’s face in hot blasts that cut straight through the cold air.

“You look like a madman,” John said, meeting Brom’s narrowed eyes.
Brom snorted and seized John by his arms, jerking him into a sitting position. “You have a lot of nerve, saying that to me.”

John could feel his flesh bruising beneath Brom’s grip, but he said nothing. He couldn’t speak – there seemed to be a blockage of some sort in his throat. He wanted to shout at Brom, to tell him that he had a lot of fucking nerve, interfering like that. But he couldn’t, so he just breathed, letting the cold air chill his insides, which had rapidly begun to heat as soon as he’d heard Brom’s voice.

“John!” The third voice was something like the sound of a bell, and it cut through John’s heart, stopping it as effectively as a bullet.

****

Where can your readers connect with you on the web? 




My website, where you can find anything and everything about all of my books, including excerpts, is: www.ranaerose.com  or connect with me on Twitter, Facebook, or Pinterest!